A stunning piece of writing from Evie for this week’s writing challenge.
Last week, Demi was busy writing a story in her fantastic new writing book.
Here is Demi’s plan for her story… it looks great.
Well done Demi, keep up the good work!
Lily started swimming down to the bottom of the lake trying to find her brother. When she got to the bottom, she fell into a big gaping hole. She started panicking as she was falling downwards really fast. She landed on something soft, she opened her eyes and noticed she was lying on a very weird mushroom type plant. It was green and had white spots on it, like polka dots. She got off it and looked around at the unusual land she had fallen into. There were loads of the mushroom looking plants all around her. She had no idea where she was, so she decided to look around for her brother and to get familiar with some of her surroundings. She walked a bit further and found a particularly weird looking hole in a wall. She decided to go through it and ended up seeing her brother trapped! Lily attempted to get her brother out but she saw a massive figure walking towards them. As it came closer, she noticed it wasn’t anything human like. It was Poseidon, the God of water. She backed up and tried thinking of something for both of them to escape. She shouted “Look there’s seaweed !” Poseidon ran off in the direction she was pointing in and tried to find the seaweed, but there wasn’t any, she quickly untied her brother.
They both started running away trying to find their way back. They stopped for a break and heard footsteps behind them. Poseidon was back! Jake ran and Lily then started catching up behind him. Jake shouted when they were both at the hole to the cave and massive boulders blocked the entrance and Poseidon couldn’t get them anymore. Both of them were trying to find the way back home. They found the hole and went up it and swam to the top of the river. They noticed it was dark so they made their way back home. They had some tea and had a conversation and then went to bed…
Here is Sophie’s entry for the writing challenge last week.
And she has been keeping busy by making a rather impressive apple powered clock! Well done Sophie!
Here’s the video link for the White Rose worksheets
Hi Kestrels, here is your home learning for this week. A huge well done to all those children who have been working so hard at home and also to all those that have sent in pieces of your fabulous writing – Miss Knapman is busy replying to you all.
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WHITE ROSE WORKSHEETS & ANSWERS
Melissa’s entry for this week’s writing challenge, she chose a to spend the rest of her life in a library… which one did you choose?